String-on sentences and a better risk
I just realized why I seldom finish prayers written on a website I follow. The author often has many good thoughts, but I seem to get lost in the prayer. My mind wanders away, so that I don’t finish reading the post. I noticed that he has run-on sentences. He often fails to punctuate them properly. Commas are needed. Dependent clauses sometimes fail to connect to the main verb. It makes me more determined to write simply. I’d rather risk being choppy than hard to understand. What do you think?